No worries! There's just a few things that need fixed rq! But otherwise a good job for a first try!
- The number of eye colors would be 2
- The rarity is Rare
- Gem shape would actually be Fluid (Crown, Heart) and Geometric (Oval) - Multi gem actually goes under # of gems
- The trait for blood color would be the shade not the color (except grey or metallics) - so in this case it would be Pastel (Blue)
- The grabbers are pawed, so to do that the # of grabbers trait would say "See Mutations"
- Need to add the Mutations section with these two traits in this order:
- Extra Fluff trait with a specification on the location (so in your case it would be "Tail")
- Pawed Grabbers
- (Not super important for this but the purpose in your case would be something like personal/ml upload - adopt would be if you were going to sell the design as an adopt)
Everything else looks good tho! Lmk if you have any questions :3
The only fix I see is that the gem shapes and number of gems needs to be specified - so it would be Fluid (Heart,Crown), Geometric (Oval), and Multi-gem(6)
Edit: I also totally forgot that Multi-Gem is a Legendary trait - so the vesper rarity would actually be Legendary, not Rare (that was my fault I told you incorrectly so I still uploaded them for ya but if you could fix that on the traits that would be great!)
Since it's just those minor changes I'll go ahead and get them uploaded for ya! I'll leave those corrections as a for future reference type deal :3
KaeyaJustExists
Theme: Retro Princess
https://www.deviantart.com/stash/0sqduukx0v3
Owner DA/Tumblr/Twitter/Site Link: https://vespercove.com/user/KaeyaJustExists
Designer DA/Tumblr/Twitter/Site Link: https://vespercove.com/user/KimmyDawn
Artist DA/Tumblr/Twitter/Site Link: https://vespercove.com/user/KimmyDawn
Rarity: Legendary
Purpose: ML Upload/Personal
If using Items, which items?: N/A
If using Items, link Inventory: N/A
TRAITS
• Eye Traits
# of Eye Colors: 2
Sclera Color: White
Pupil Shape: Slit
• Head Traits
Sets of Horns: None
Gem Shape: Fluid (Heart, Crown) and Geometric (Oval)
# of Gems: Multigem (6)
Ear Type: Mouse
Nose Type: Pony
• Mouth Traits
Teeth: Fanged
Tongue: Split
Blood Color: Pastel (Blue)
• Scale Traits
Scale Shape: Natural
Scale Placement: Under eye, neck and belly
Additional Scale Placements: N/A
• Body Traits
Hind Legs: Paws
# of Grabbers: See mutations
Tail Type: Unicorn
• Mutations
> Extra Fluff (Tail)
> Pawed Grabbers
(Forgive me for anything thats wrong, It's my first time filling a sheet)
2024-10-08 22:25:26 (Edited 2024-10-29 15:33:31)
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Rose-Blade Staff Member
No worries! There's just a few things that need fixed rq! But otherwise a good job for a first try!
- The number of eye colors would be 2
- The rarity is Rare
- Gem shape would actually be Fluid (Crown, Heart) and Geometric (Oval) - Multi gem actually goes under # of gems
- The trait for blood color would be the shade not the color (except grey or metallics) - so in this case it would be Pastel (Blue)
- The grabbers are pawed, so to do that the # of grabbers trait would say "See Mutations"
- Need to add the Mutations section with these two traits in this order:
- Extra Fluff trait with a specification on the location (so in your case it would be "Tail")
- Pawed Grabbers
- (Not super important for this but the purpose in your case would be something like personal/ml upload - adopt would be if you were going to sell the design as an adopt)
Everything else looks good tho! Lmk if you have any questions :3
2024-10-14 09:24:50
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KaeyaJustExists
Fixed! Lmk if any other changes need to be made
2024-10-28 17:59:52
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Rose-Blade Staff Member
The only fix I see is that the gem shapes and number of gems needs to be specified - so it would be Fluid (Heart,Crown), Geometric (Oval), and Multi-gem(6)
Edit: I also totally forgot that Multi-Gem is a Legendary trait - so the vesper rarity would actually be Legendary, not Rare (that was my fault I told you incorrectly so I still uploaded them for ya but if you could fix that on the traits that would be great!)
Since it's just those minor changes I'll go ahead and get them uploaded for ya! I'll leave those corrections as a for future reference type deal :3
2024-10-29 11:02:58 (Edited 2024-10-29 11:23:18)
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KaeyaJustExists
Fixed that too, and no worries! Tysm
2024-10-29 15:34:09
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