Comments on Approval and ML Submission



Scarlet-The-Flox Avatar

Theme: Toxic Waste
Owner DA/Tumblr/Twitter/Site Link:
DA: Ravenwingedcastiel Vespercove: TheAngelWhoWouldBeKing
Designer DA/Tumblr/Twitter/Site Link: DA: Rivers-Of-Trees Vespercove: Scarlet-The-Flox
Base Maker's DA/Tumblr/Twitter/Site Link:: DA: Alteric Vespercove: Alteric

Rarity: Legondary
Vesperfication, Custom, Adopt, Personal or Gift: Custom
Are you using any items: (If so please attach your Vespercove.com inventory and specify what item)

If Vesperfication, please give the OG Designers DA/Tumblr/Twitter/Site Link:

Please use the (https://vespercove.com/world/species/1/traits), to write out the vespers traits, add a (C), (UC), (R), (L), (Co) or (M) to indicate each rarity for each trait! Thank you : D

Traits:
# of Eye Colors: 1 Eye Color (Common)
Sclera Color: White Sclera (Common)
Pupil Shape: Round Pupil (Uncommon)
Gem Shape: Geometric Shape Gem (Common)
Gem #: One Gem (Common)
Scale Shape: Round/Circle Scales (Common)
Nose: Pony Nose (Common)
Teeth: Fanged Teeth (Common)
Tongue: Round Tongue (Common)
Blood Color: Bright Blood (Legondary)
Scale Placement: Under Eye, Neck & Belly (Mandatory)
Scale Placement: (Up to Common, UC, R or Leg, Please list all places out) Up To Common (Common)
Hind Legs: Paws Legs (Rare)
Ear Type: Bat Ear (Common)
# of Grabbers: See Mutations
Tails: See Mutationd
Horns: No Horns (Common)
Mutations: Paws Instead of Grabbers (Rare),Dog Tail (Uncommon)
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pls note this was done before getting blacklisted (trying to get all vesper customs approved now that i have time to make fixes to them, will do one at a time)

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/821456115006963722/1050396633747161178/custom_by_rivers_of_trees_df8eb1o-pre.png

2022-12-08 08:49:38 (Edited 2022-12-08 08:51:45)

Jestea Avatar
Jestea Staff Member

Unfortunately, the moderators believe this design is much too similar to an existing vesper, and the designer agrees! Considerable changes will be needed before your design can be approved (apologies for the super late notification of this).
https://vespercove.com/character/ML-4267

Some suggestions of what you can do:
- Lighten/darken body color
- Move around and/or some of the white areas
- Change markings
One of these changes alone will not be enough, so all of these suggestions combined are the most recommended

2022-12-22 16:17:29